Wednesday, December 16, 2015

happy holidays, everyone!!

dear lovely students of mine,

have a wonderful holiday break!! reboot/recharge/breathe. come back in the spring and get ready to kick ass. remember the things we learned this semester. write a lot. read a lot. write more. read more.

thanks for being great, laughing at my jokes, and most of all, being respectful of each other and to me!

take care and until next year...! i'll probably be back in the fall - come and say hi!

i leave with you one of my favorite quotes by jack kerouac...

“the only people for me are the mad ones, the ones who are mad to live, mad to talk, mad to be saved, desirous of everything at the same time, the ones who never yawn or say a commonplace thing, but burn, burn, burn like fabulous yellow roman candles exploding like spiders across the stars.”

B

Monday, December 7, 2015

hilarious!

thought you guys might appreciate this since we started off this semester talking a lot about love in the 21st century....

SNL skit about a fictional app called SETTL. Click HERE to watch it.


Wednesday, November 18, 2015

final paper prompt

Your final paper should be the culmination of all the rhetorical strategies you've learned this semester from They Say, I Say. 

The topic: You can choose a topic based on any of the readings we have done in class - the essay handouts, the course reader, the textbook, or the primary texts. (Caveat: do not write on a topic you have previously used for your first paper on love and technology and do not re-use research you have done for a previous paper. This will result in an automatic failing grade.)

Example #1: You read the essay in the course reader on Why White Kids Love Hip Hop and decide to write about urban culture and racial identity. 
Example #2: You were intrigued by the film American Beauty and decide to write about how the film both reflects and subverts "the male gaze" in various ways. 
Example #3: You were intrigued by the essay on fast food and obesity and decide to write about the rise of fitness culture and the organic food industry and how one's relationship to "healthy" living is directly linked to socioeconomic privilege. 

The argument/the thesis: Your paper should bring to light a controversy or debate on a given topic. Do not choose sources that all agree on the subject you choose. Give yourself room to agree with some ideas and challenge others. Feel free to explore ideas in your thesis rather than limit yourself to a strict argument. Ask good and interesting questions. Be sure to argue different angles. Be your own devil's advocate. Anticipate criticism and use your critical thinking skills to cover all the bases. Surprise yourself. Don't say things that are obvious or that 99% of your peers would agree with. Your paper should develop ideas throughout the 5-6 pages - meaning, you should not start and end with the same sentiment. If you begin by asking some serious questions, your thought process throughout the paper and your presentation of others' ideas should build on each other and your conclusion, as a result, should have new and intriguing answers to the questions you posed at the beginning of your essay.

Style: Start writing as soon as you can. Don't procrastinate on writing a draft. The majority of your time should be spent on revision, not drafting. Drafting is when you write everything your brain is thinking. Revision is when you refine and edit and omit.

Revision: Be merciless in your revisions. Be harsh. Omit every superfluous word, sentence, paragraph - if it doesn't NEED to be there, take it out.

The requirements: 
1. You need to cite at least three outside sources (not read in class). These sources should be professional and well-recognized sources of information (academic or professional sources such as The New York Times, essay in a critical anthology, books, or academic journals). If you use articles or interviews from the internet that are not well-respected sources, they can be additional sources but do not count as one of your three required outside sources. (Hint: be sure to re-read the section on how to properly introduce and engage with an outside source in an academic essay from They Say, I Say). DO NOT LIMIT your research by only conducting a google search! This is a huge mistake. Go to the library - search key words in the library database, talk to a research librarian, use the library to access hundreds of databases of academic journals. A great search engine for academic journals is JSTOR but this search engine is usually reserved and password protected for institutional use only - meaning you probably do not have access to full articles at home or on your personal computer. Access is only granted if you are using a school computer.

2. 5-6 pages double-spaced, 1 inch margins, 12 point font, no extra spaces between paragraphs, must include a works cited page, must follow MLA guidelines (if your paper does not meet any of these minimum requirements, it will receive a failing grade). Look up MLA guidelines online - there is absolutely no excuse for not following MLA guidelines. It is simple and easy to understand if you put the energy into learning how to cite properly.

3. Turn in a 1-2 page paper proposal by Monday November 23. This will be a graded assignment (check plus, check, check minus will indicate the level of thinking you've done on your topic so far). In this proposal, you should outline to the best of your ability what topic you will write about. You should mention at least one outside source (include title and publication information) so I can get an idea of the level of research you have done on the topic. I will comment on the quality of the research and if I am familiar with the topic, I can point you in the right direction. If you change topics, it is your responsibility to approve the topic with me before the final paper is due. If you do not receive an approval on your topic (check or check plus), I will not grade your final paper.

If there is enough interest in doing a peer writing workshop for your final papers, we can discuss potential dates for this. Most likely, this will push your deadline for college essays to 12/7 and a peer writing workshop for final papers can be on the last day of class 12/9.

FINAL PAPERS ARE DUE DURING FINALS WEEK
Monday 8 am class - your final papers are due on Monday December 14 8:30-9:30 am
Monday 9:30 am class - your final papers are due on Wednesday December 16 8:30-9:30am

As always - if you have any questions about this paper, please feel free to email me or talk to me after class.


Saturday, October 31, 2015

between the world and me

There is a lot of reading material on Ta-Nehisi Coates's Between the World and Me. Search around and find an article you'd like to discuss for Wednesday's class. Bring it with you.

Looking forward to the fruits of your labor/research!


Sunday, October 11, 2015

Sub tomorrow

Hi All,

Over the course of the next few weeks, you might have some substitute teachers until I feel better.
Tomorrow, Cathy Fitzgerald has generously offered to teach both of my classes. I've given her an outline of what to do but when she asks you to participate, please be as engaging and talkative as you are with me! She will really appreciate that. It's not easy to come into a class you don't have a rapport with so make her feel welcome, as I know you can!

Don't forget to bring both assignments with you - the short essay you've written in response to question no.2 in chapter 4 of They Say, I Say and the college essay prompt you would like to write on.

Hopefully, I will see you on Wednesday!

Friday, October 9, 2015

college essay prompts

here are the essay prompts for the common application 2015-2016 which many colleges use. these might be for incoming freshmen, but that's fine. if you prefer these over the prompts for transfer students, you may choose one of the prompts below for the purposes of this assignment.

1. Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.

2. The lessons we take from failure can be fundamental to later success. Recount an incident or time when you experienced failure. How did it affect you, and what did you learn from the experience?

3. Reflect on a time when you challenged a belief or idea. What prompted you to act? Would you make the same decision again?

4. Describe a problem you’ve solved or a problem you’d like to solve. It can be an intellectual challenge, a research query, an ethical dilemma-anything that is of personal importance, no matter the scale. Explain its significance to you and what steps you took or could be taken to identify a solution.

5. Discuss an accomplishment or event, formal or informal, that marked your transition from childhood to adulthood within your culture, community, or family. 

Sunday, October 4, 2015

class cancellation

hi all,

i'm not feeling well and will not be able to teach class tomorrow. i apologize for the late notice - i will also be sending out a group email tonight.

please see the right hand side for reading assignment due on wednesday.

best,
bonnie

Monday, September 21, 2015

Stolen papers

Hello All,

This afternoon, a thief broke into my car and stole your essays. They must have been really good essays!

Unfortunately, that means everyone will have to re-print their essays and hand them in next Monday. I would say Wednesday but since there is little chance that everyone will read this blogpost, it's impossible for me to hold each of you accountable for it.

While this crime has very few benefits for anyone, I did find one. It means that you all have one more week to polish your essays. No one will be the wiser. Well, except the thief, for having read your amazingly insightful and thought provoking essays on love and technology. Too bad I'll have to wait until Monday to read them myself.

Signing off (from not my computer),
B.A.

Friday, September 18, 2015

Course Reader

Hi All,

The course reader is now available at the DVC Bookstore! Please pick up your copy asap.
Our first reading assignment from the reader will be assigned the following week.


Thursday, September 10, 2015

the article i was telling you about in class on 9/9

why have young people in Japan stopped having sex? 

i took a screenshot of the results when i googled this phrase. lots of interesting articles out there!!

if you need help researching on your own topics for the paper, you should definitely visit the reference desk at the library!!



Tuesday, September 1, 2015

To Tinder or not to Tinder...

In chapter 3 of Modern Romance, Ansari talks a lot about the app Tinder and mentions this article. Funny though, it doesn't seem like they really read it from the way they referenced it....

It's a great read! click here for the full article.

Tinder on holiday? It's a thing! Click here for the full article.

From serial monogamy to casual sex? Click here for the full article.

Thursday, August 27, 2015

What is A Critical Response?

so...some of you are struggling with understanding what a critical response is and that is completely understandable. throughout college, instructors are going to expect you to know how to do things that you have never done before. part of becoming a great student and growing up, in general, is knowing when to ask questions and when to try to figure out how to do things on your own. it's a tough balance.

as a teacher, i like to be very clear about what i expect from you all. so if you're ever in doubt about an assignment, you should never hesitate to ask me for more detail. so here is an excellent outline of instructions on how to write a critical response.

click here ! if you follow these instructions, you should have a GREAT response.

also, don't forget that the critical response needs to have two things:
1. an AMAZING first sentence.
2. an argument with a naysayer (look at the section on this topic in they say, i say for suggestions)

good luck! i'm looking forward to reading your thoughts on modern romance & jonathan franzen :)

Monday, August 24, 2015

HOW TO READ ACTIVELY or HOW TO GET GAME

As a college student, you should be actively reading all primary texts for any given course. But, what is active reading? How do I know that I am actively reading? What have I been doing all this time if I'm not actively reading? What is the opposite of active reading?

Being an active reader also translates into becoming a more attentive listener, an engaged conversationalist, and overall, GREAT company. Hence, the alternate title I added: how to get game. I promised you some pearls of wisdom, didn't I?

Read the points below carefully to make sure you know the difference between active reading and passive reading. It takes many students years to learn how to "actively" read texts when left on their own. The following lists are here to help you determine what kind of reader you are and to help you learn how to become active rather than passive. Your ability to read actively will determine your success as a student and as a working professional.

Active reading means:
-that you're thinking while reading
-you're having a conversation in your head with the ideas that are being presented to you
-that you're conscious of HOW the ideas are presented not just WHAT those ideas are
-you're taking notes, underlining, writing down questions, looking up words you don't understand or references you didn't get
-you are not just passively consuming the words but actively thinking about them, critically evaluating them, trying to better understand them, think of examples that might negate them or support them
-re-reading key passages that have major ideas or re-reading the entire text for clarity
-you can articulate the major points and identify the gaps in logic or lack of evidence to support the writer's claims
-based on your careful consideration of the text, you have formed your own opinion about the ideas presented to you

Passive reading means:
-you accept all ideas that the writer presents as truth
-you think you can discuss the reading assignment or write about it from memory
- you think about things while reading, but you rarely write them down
-your text, after you've read it, is generally unmarked
-you don't have any questions after you're done reading
-if you don't understand something, you gloss over it or forget about it
-you don't really care about the ideas so it's difficult to form an opinion about them
-every piece of writing feels like a story that is being told to you. reading feels like listening to another person give a monologue.
-it's hard for you to identify the main points of a piece of writing
-you don't really understand what rhetorical strategies are or how the writer uses them to persuade you
-you don't really think about how a story is being told, you tend to focus on the plot
-you mostly agree and believe everything the author/writer says

Be honest and ask yourself: what kind of reader am I? Once you figure out which list best reflects your reading habits, you can begin to conscientiously change. 

As an example of the kind of notes you might take as an active reader, I am pasting some of my own notes below for the article we just read about "why 'do what you love' is pernicious advice." These notes include questions for discussion, things I didn't agree with or understand or wanted clarified, words I think students might not know, and finally, random thoughts that might be relevant to the discussion or illustrative of the points the article is addressing.

NOTES:

definition of pernicious: having a harmful effect, especially in a subtle or gradual way


the main point seems to be that “Do what you love” is a corporate conspiracy to increase productivity and exploit labor


begins with a statistic 1970s-present moment (workers are more productive now than ever but not valued more)

cultural icons of super successful blissful workers: Steve Jobs, Gwyneth Paltrow, Oprah Winfrey
Q: What’s wrong with this list?

Instagram and social media culture
Q: In what ways does Tokumitsu suggest that new technology might affect “work culture”? How has visual culture changed? Let’s think of examples of “work” pictures that Tokumitsu vaguely mentions (photos of business trips, backstage at a catalog photo shoot?) – can you think of images that you’ve seen of people at work that make you want to buy something or consider that particular career?
Q: Name some jobs that are not picturesque but highly respected.

Typical Americans – selfish and greedy?
Q: How did our grandmother’s/grandfather’s generation choose a career path?
Q: What changed from then until now?
Q: How does Tokumitsu explain this shift?
Q: What are some of the things that Tokumitsu keeps referring to as “very American”?  (pleasure-seeking and hedonistic - what else?)

define hedonistic: engaged in the pursuit of pleasure; sensually self-indulgent

Q: Summarize what Tokumitsu says about the absurdity of requiring menial laborers to be passionate about what they do.
Is passion reserved for the upper middle class? Is doing what you love impacted by your socioeconomic status?

“Authentic” customer service

Q: In your jobs, what have you been taught about customer service?
Q: In the article, Tokumitsu discusses Pret A Manger and their demand that their employees “project happiness” and authenticity – aren’t these at adds with one another?

this reminds me of aziz ansari's standup bit about coldstone creamery and the tip song and dance the employees are required to do

Career ladder and the reality of work

Q: What are the politics behind internships? (unpaid – reserved for individuals who have other means of financial support, a way to signal privilege, etc.)

Work/Life Balance

define meritocracy: government or the holding of power by people selected on the basis of their ability

Q: Worker surveillance – what do you think about employers encouraging their employees to improve their lives? (For example, companies like Google who have volleyball courts, ping pong tables, three gourmet meals a day, childcare, car washes, haircuts, dry cleaning all on-site).

Q: As Lam questions, why can’t we just go to work to make money?

(isn’t this question making a lot of assumptions? Aren’t there a lot of us that already do work just to make money? From what position are we standing that we can ask this question? Isn’t this entire debate one of privilege?)

Sunday, August 23, 2015

love is not algorithmic

love is not algorithmic - click here to read the article

what data can't do - click here to read the article

for badiou - click here

Wednesday, August 19, 2015

Important things to remember

1. Buy the required texts asap. We will be discussing Modern Romance as early as Wednesday. Do not wait for the bookstore to carry the books since that could take up to three weeks. I will let you know when the course reader is available at the bookstore. Until then, I will provide photocopies of the extra readings you will need.

2. Look on the right side "For Wednesday" - be sure to read the article online BEFORE class, think about or write down your answers to the questions and come to class prepared to talk about it. I will provide you with a hard copy for class discussion.

3. Today, on the board, I provided several online reading suggestions for those of you who don't know where to begin on your journey of becoming a well-read person and excellent conversationalist! I'm listing them here with links.

The Onion - satire, anyone?
The Atlantic - a wide array of articles on everything from autism to jay-z
The New York Times - needs no introduction
The AV Club - didn't understand the season finale of true detective? don't fret, the av club has your back.

 4. For those of you who missed the first day or were spacing out on the first day:
your first writing assignment was due today on 8/19, one page on the following three things:
a) your goals for the class b) what might get in the way of you achieving those goals (i.e. full-time job, childcare, your lack of confidence, poor study habits, slow reader, etc.) and c) what do you plan on doing to make sure there are no (or as few as possible) obstacles between you and your goals

This first writing assignment is a kind of assessment as well as a means of getting to know you better as a student. I hope to better understand what you want to take away from this class and how to help you achieve your goals. So please make sure to write clearly and be honest.
(Single-spaced, one page, typed, 1 inch margins)

Have a great weekend and see you Monday!

Monday, August 17, 2015

Welcome to our course website!

This blog is for students taking ENG 122 (sections 0646, 0673) at DVC, Fall 2015.

Our current weekly schedule can always be found on the right so if you miss class, you know what to do. I will update the blog periodically with class activities and discussion topics as well as the weekly reading assignment. Sometimes, I will post reading that we don't have time for in class. Or clips of things I think are relevant to our course. It is up to you to read and watch these on your own time.

If you are unsure of something, please consult the course syllabus which can also be found here.

This is a resource for you so feel free to visit as often as you'd like.

I'm looking forward to a great semester!